영문 자기소개서입니다. 봐주세요~
번호:390 글쓴이: visage
조회:828 날짜:2003/07/04 10:32
.. 광고회사 아르바이트 자기소개서 입니다.
읽고 냉정한 충고 부탁드립니다. 표현도 좀 봐주시고요.
<ALL THAT ***>
# 1. Let’s try!
When I was a freshman, I decided to go to America by camping car. I put my hopes on meeting new friends and speaking English more fluently.
At first, I lost confidence in myself but made my mind to make a very nice surprise to the people. I tried to speak ahead to others and be always kind with a big smile. After the travel for 10days throughout the five lakes in USA, I could make many friends of diverse nationalities. In addition, I could obtain confidence, the most important partner to me.
# 2. Let’s understand!
Last summer vacation, I started for Europe to study French in Dijon, a small town near Paris and travel European countries. After the language courses, I visited three countries(France, Italy, Swiss)with my friend who became known during training. Through this journey, I can broaden my outlook and learn the way to communicate from my heart and take others into consideration.
# 3. Let’s lead!
I was a vice president in French language department for 6 months. I played the trigger role in the festival and made a plan for regular French drama. During festival, we prepared traditional French snacks and cookies that evoked an echo to many children near university. Especially, when I prepared the drama, I had to visit many companies to let them know our event and make them support it. Fortunately from these experiences, I could learn that leading something needs thoroughness and ‘Yes’ mind. The drama was very successful and I became an incorrigible optimist to overcome various situations.
# 4. Let’s make my originality!
To broaden experience by becoming a working member of society, I tried to enter a brand strategy company because I really wanted to be creative all the time. I made a list about restaurant’s brand names to be chosen. They was satisfied a stake house’s name ‘A big fan of stake’ and a traditional French homemade restaurant ‘Chez moi’. Although I made many brand names approximately 500 during internship, there was nothing to be selected a final proposition. But I could get flexibility that I could always be imaginative.
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clear Let's 는 Let us 의 줄임말입니다... 자기 자신에게 하는 말 같은데 Let's라고 쓰는게 이상하지 않을까요??? [2003/07/07]
우진호 도용한 문장 같다는 느낌이 많이 드네요.... [2003/07/07]
visage 고맙습니다.^^여러모로 손보고 외국인 친구와 상의해서 제출했습니다. [2003/07/07]
수이 전체적으로 신경써서 작성한 노력이 보입니다. 간혹, 의미가 와 닿지 않는 구절과 문장, 그리고 문법이 틀린곳이 몇군데 있네요. 그것만 수정하시면 괜찮을것 같습니다.
번호:390 글쓴이: visage
조회:828 날짜:2003/07/04 10:32
.. 광고회사 아르바이트 자기소개서 입니다.
읽고 냉정한 충고 부탁드립니다. 표현도 좀 봐주시고요.
<ALL THAT ***>
# 1. Let’s try!
When I was a freshman, I decided to go to America by camping car. I put my hopes on meeting new friends and speaking English more fluently.
At first, I lost confidence in myself but made my mind to make a very nice surprise to the people. I tried to speak ahead to others and be always kind with a big smile. After the travel for 10days throughout the five lakes in USA, I could make many friends of diverse nationalities. In addition, I could obtain confidence, the most important partner to me.
# 2. Let’s understand!
Last summer vacation, I started for Europe to study French in Dijon, a small town near Paris and travel European countries. After the language courses, I visited three countries(France, Italy, Swiss)with my friend who became known during training. Through this journey, I can broaden my outlook and learn the way to communicate from my heart and take others into consideration.
# 3. Let’s lead!
I was a vice president in French language department for 6 months. I played the trigger role in the festival and made a plan for regular French drama. During festival, we prepared traditional French snacks and cookies that evoked an echo to many children near university. Especially, when I prepared the drama, I had to visit many companies to let them know our event and make them support it. Fortunately from these experiences, I could learn that leading something needs thoroughness and ‘Yes’ mind. The drama was very successful and I became an incorrigible optimist to overcome various situations.
# 4. Let’s make my originality!
To broaden experience by becoming a working member of society, I tried to enter a brand strategy company because I really wanted to be creative all the time. I made a list about restaurant’s brand names to be chosen. They was satisfied a stake house’s name ‘A big fan of stake’ and a traditional French homemade restaurant ‘Chez moi’. Although I made many brand names approximately 500 during internship, there was nothing to be selected a final proposition. But I could get flexibility that I could always be imaginative.
아바타정보|같은옷구입
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clear Let's 는 Let us 의 줄임말입니다... 자기 자신에게 하는 말 같은데 Let's라고 쓰는게 이상하지 않을까요??? [2003/07/07]
우진호 도용한 문장 같다는 느낌이 많이 드네요.... [2003/07/07]
visage 고맙습니다.^^여러모로 손보고 외국인 친구와 상의해서 제출했습니다. [2003/07/07]
수이 전체적으로 신경써서 작성한 노력이 보입니다. 간혹, 의미가 와 닿지 않는 구절과 문장, 그리고 문법이 틀린곳이 몇군데 있네요. 그것만 수정하시면 괜찮을것 같습니다.
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