우앙~ 낼이 면접인데 영어소개서거덩여 ~고수님들 꼭 봐주세여
번호:2333 글쓴이: haizhen
조회:144 날짜:2003/12/11 22:05
.. 낼이 면접인데 제가 영어 허접이걸랑여, 고수님 수정좀 꼭 해주세여..
The most unforgettable memories for me is the period that I studied in China.
Of course, besides this, I have the various experiences just like as interpretation. But, because when I was in China, I've helped the old people from Korea.
They came China for the tour. But when I met them, they were about to buy their present. And the chinese merchants wanted to sell their merchandise more expensively. So I helped them buy their presents cheaply.
Although it is just interpretation, but it is the most unforgettable memories in my life. Thank you for your listening.
The most favorite things for me are seeing a movie and playing billiard.
At first, I like movie very well. Among them, I take pleasure in looking at the Chinese movie. Because I studied Chinese language and literature in University. So I have no problem with listening. But I like Hollywood movie as well to study English. Because I want to work at the overseas trading division.
Secondly, I like play billiard with friends. Because I love to keep a good relationship with my friends. So I can say it is the one of my favorite things.
Thank you for your listening.
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GO! KT! memories->memory, just like as->such as, I've helped->I helped, came->came to, their presents-> some gifts for souvenir, wanted to sell their merchandise more expensively->were trying to sell them pups, cheaply-> cheaper, The most favorite things for me ->My hobbies are [2003/12/12]
GO! KT! a movie-> movies, billiard->billiards, very well-> very much, looking at the Chinese movie->watching Chinese movies, studied->have studied, to study English->because it is helpful in learning English, a good relationship ->good relationships, the one->one [2003/12/12]
GO! KT! 여기까지가 제 한계네요. 저도 네이티브가 아니어서 틀릴 수 있기 때문에 확실히 어색한 것만 고쳤습니다. 문법적으로 좀 틀려도 자신감있게 하는게 중요한 것 같습니다. 화이팅! [2003/12/12]
haizhen 바쁘실텐데 넘 고맙습니다..^^
번호:2333 글쓴이: haizhen
조회:144 날짜:2003/12/11 22:05
.. 낼이 면접인데 제가 영어 허접이걸랑여, 고수님 수정좀 꼭 해주세여..
The most unforgettable memories for me is the period that I studied in China.
Of course, besides this, I have the various experiences just like as interpretation. But, because when I was in China, I've helped the old people from Korea.
They came China for the tour. But when I met them, they were about to buy their present. And the chinese merchants wanted to sell their merchandise more expensively. So I helped them buy their presents cheaply.
Although it is just interpretation, but it is the most unforgettable memories in my life. Thank you for your listening.
The most favorite things for me are seeing a movie and playing billiard.
At first, I like movie very well. Among them, I take pleasure in looking at the Chinese movie. Because I studied Chinese language and literature in University. So I have no problem with listening. But I like Hollywood movie as well to study English. Because I want to work at the overseas trading division.
Secondly, I like play billiard with friends. Because I love to keep a good relationship with my friends. So I can say it is the one of my favorite things.
Thank you for your listening.
아바타정보|같은옷구입
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GO! KT! memories->memory, just like as->such as, I've helped->I helped, came->came to, their presents-> some gifts for souvenir, wanted to sell their merchandise more expensively->were trying to sell them pups, cheaply-> cheaper, The most favorite things for me ->My hobbies are [2003/12/12]
GO! KT! a movie-> movies, billiard->billiards, very well-> very much, looking at the Chinese movie->watching Chinese movies, studied->have studied, to study English->because it is helpful in learning English, a good relationship ->good relationships, the one->one [2003/12/12]
GO! KT! 여기까지가 제 한계네요. 저도 네이티브가 아니어서 틀릴 수 있기 때문에 확실히 어색한 것만 고쳤습니다. 문법적으로 좀 틀려도 자신감있게 하는게 중요한 것 같습니다. 화이팅! [2003/12/12]
haizhen 바쁘실텐데 넘 고맙습니다..^^
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