Geronimo Stilton
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ORIGINAL ENTRY: Chapter 1
A Very SPECIAL MORNING
A VERY SPECIAL MORNING
There is a mouse called Geronimo stilton.
There was a mouse called Geronimo Stilton.
He was not a morning mouse.He skip breakfast
He was not a morning mouse. He had to skip breakfast
because he's alarm clock went off too early.
Because he’s alarm clock went off too early.
It was a bad day,Because,It was one of those days when anything that
It was a bad day because it was one of those days when anything that
could go worng,did go wrong.He is a kind mouse who likes routine.He
couldn’t go wrong. He is a kind of mouse who likes routine. He
don't like to jump on the bed.And it was a special day because it was a
doesn’t like to jump on the bed. It was a special day because it was a
career day of his nephew,Benjamin.And he said,"I'll make Benjamin
Career day of his nephew Benjamin. He said, “ I’ll make Benjamin proud.
proud!"
FINAL ENTRY WITH CORRECTIONS;
A VERY SPECIAL MORNING
There was a mouse called Geronimo Stilton. He was not a morning mouse. He had to skip breakfast because he’s alarm clock went off too early. It was a bad day because it was one of those days when anything couldn’t go wrong. He is a kind of mouse who likes routine. He doesn’t like to jump on the bed. It was a special day because it was a Career day of his nephew Benjamin. He said, “I’ll make Benjamin proud.
Comment:
Good Job! Your summary is very good and you can follow sentence construction easily. Just be careful with the spelling and the names of the characters.
Teacher Therese!