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작성자얼라잇|작성시간09.11.23|조회수57 목록 댓글 0

인터팔에 올릴라고 썻는데,,,, 틀린거 많이 있을거에요 첨삭 부탁드려용 ^^

 

Hi everybody in interpals.

My name is Jinhong Jung, I'm live in Korea where is beautiful and amazing. My family is composed of parents , one little sister, and one little brother. The gab of ages between me and my brother is 10. I'm 21 years old.

I'm a soldier in Korean Air force, In my country, a healthful man must go to the military like the army, the navy, and the air force so on.
After all, I've gotten recruited the air force about a year ago. It is one of the worst mistake I've done. The time in there is just flying out away~. But it is so fun to hang out with my companions in the military. And at the same time I'm feeling about sadness because I cannot do what I want in there.
So IT IS AMBIGUOUS FOR ME TO SPEND TIME IN THERE.
After a year, I'll discharge from military service. I hope to come the day quickly.

Before I became a soldier, I was a student of an University of Korea. I was specializing­ in computer science. I'm very interested in the computer and everything I do with the computer. I'll get a job about the computer.
If you want to debate or talk with me about the computer and send a message about that, I'll reply happily.

I like not only the computer, but also playing the guitar and reading books. Those are my hobbies. I'm not good at playing the guitar, but I can enjoy. The melodies from the instrument used to give me calm and pleasant ness. And I love to listen the music which is recorded by the guitar. If you recommand some music, I'll very so happy that I'll hop back and forth.

Nowdays, I'm studying English in my troops. it is so hard to study the language alone. I'm reading a book in English and studying grammar, but I think those aren't particularly­ effective. So I found "INTERPALS"­. I believe it will give me the way I use the language and let me make foriegn friends.

I welcome if you send me a message. And If someone want to learn Korean, just sand me a message. I'll reaply kindly.

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