He got many mouney from his invention
In 1880s, Adison Edison growing grew up.
He wanted to sanding send messages esiear more easily.
He invanted invented many invention inventions.
He got many mouney money from his inventions.
Score: B+
Tips)
- 사람 이름은 Edison이라고 써요.
- want to 뒤에는 동사 원형(send)을 써요.
- invention이 여러 개면 inventions라고 써요.
- Edison이 어떤 것을 발명했는지 한 가지 더 쓰면 글이 더 좋아져요.
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