Thomas Edison grew up in the1850s the 1850s.
His mind was too full of ideas!
He invented the phonograph at Menlo Park.
In 1880, he invented a new type of light bulb.
He started his own company.
In 1896, he showed the first movie.
Thomas invented more than one thousand products.
Score: A+
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- the와 1850s 사이를 띄어 써요.
- 내용이 자세하고 순서도 잘 정리되어 있어요.
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