Milly and Molly have had a blue bird.
The bird is was a clown.
But he was miserable.
They back to went back to the kind man.
He said**,** "Blue bird The blue bird and Yellow bird the yellow bird are friends and need to be together."
So they have got the pale blue bird.
Score: A-
Tips) 이야기가 과거 이야기라서 have 대신 had를 써요.
Tips) "go back"은 "다시 돌아가다"라는 뜻이에요.
Tips) 마지막에 새들이 함께 있어서 왜 행복했는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 좋아요.
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