Milly and Molly want wanted to take a bird.
They saw a bird standing on his head.
He could do soccer with pebbble a pebble.
They take took him.
But he don't didn't do soccer.
They take took another bird.
I think this story is fun.
Score: B+
Tips) 이야기가 과거 이야기라서 want, take는 wanted, took으로 써요.
Tips) pebble 앞에는 a를 붙여요.
Tips) 왜 새가 축구를 하지 않았는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어져요.
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