Jadoo changed her partner in the school.
Jadoo became partners with Eun hee Eunhee.
They away fighted always fought.
Finally they found their good thing good qualities.
And they had a happy ending.
Score: A-
Tips)
• “always fought”는 “항상 싸웠다”라는 뜻이에요. “fighted”는 쓰지 않아요.
• 이름은 “Eunhee”처럼 붙여 쓰는 것이 좋아요.
• 마지막에 어떤 좋은 점을 발견했는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!
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