Today I writed wrote Jadoo's story.
Jadoo wanted to be the school runner.
Jadoo tried to run fast.
Her rivel rival Unhee Eunhee and Jadoo fighted fought, and Jadoo won!
I thinked thought this story is was funny!
Score: A-
Tips)
• “wrote,” “fought,” “thought”는 자주 쓰는 불규칙 동사예요. 외워 두세요!
• “rival”은 경쟁자라는 뜻이에요.
• 마지막 문장까지 과거형으로 맞춰서 아주 좋아요!
• 왜 이 이야기가 재미있었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 멋진 감상문이 돼요!
* Great job on including my directions on summary!
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