Today**'s** story is A Beautiful Time.
Jadoo wonder wondered about the tree's name.
Jadoo having had a tea party with the girls off on the mountain**,** but mom doesn't listen.
Mom says, "Why are you taking Mimi's toy with you?" so Mimi angry so Mimi became angry.
Jadoo gave Mimi chocolate chucks chunks to calm her anger.
Score: A-
Tips)
• 과거 이야기이므로 “wondered”와 “had”를 써요!
• “on the mountain”이 자연스러운 표현이에요.
• “became angry”는 “화가 났다”는 뜻이에요.
• 왜 Jadoo가 Mimi의 장난감을 가져갔는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!
Good job in making the changes. Keep it up!!!
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